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New Post 5/1/2008 4:19 AM
  poeticslave
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One Summer Day 

One Summer Day
 
I want to muse—
without
wearing eye-glasses, but
urge my pen for words that guide
to sea of love. Sun makes
 
her lips fiery, we sip
the day,
swallow it, childishly! Hmm, Nitz’s heart
pumps out breath, holding our souls
 
like victims for ransom. Ah,
etching our aliases in the sudor like wine
on the lustful spread of green, I
 
look for the cheerful shadow
of sky, as we dress our minds
 
with chrysanthemum of a summer day.
   
 

 
New Post 5/5/2008 12:54 PM
  brakeonthroo
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Re: One Summer Day 

thats a beautiful poem

Mattt

 
New Post 5/6/2008 6:01 AM
  anonymous
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Re: One Summer Day 

poeticslave,

lovepassionlovepassionlovepassionlovepassion...you write like you are directly being whispered to by the gods...

jane

 
New Post 5/8/2008 6:40 AM
  isis277
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Re: One Summer Day 

nicely done...i like the line:

"holding our souls

like victims for ransom.

 

Isis

 
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