Poeticslave,
This is very passionate and I adore the line sip the day...it is love languishing, it is a Sunday afternoon. I love it!
jane
hello jane,
it's ok, i've read your comment and thank you, for sharing your thought on it. rgds, poeticslave
No, really, it's easy, as in relaxed. There is a familiarity that shines through between the couple in the poem. Give yourself some credit-it's more than ok...jane