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New Post 8/10/2008 3:57 PM
  Aaron Xenos
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If I were a tree... 
If I were a tree…
 
If I were a tree,
I would gander at thee,
whose roots are all asunder.
 
Your senses are weak,
for although you can speak,
my meaning is much less a blunder.
 
Your eyes must be shut,
for although you can strut,
you only see to plunder.
 
If only you knew,
how lucky you are,
whose roots are all asunder.
 
If I were a tree,
I would say unto thee,
do not wish to be me.
 
For all the world is yours to choose
where to plant your roots.
 
New Post 8/16/2008 3:27 AM
  poeticpiers
146 posts
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Re: If I were a tree... 

I liked this very much   contains some simple truths your use of the gander tickled me pink Not common to see these days

 
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