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New Post 7/18/2008 4:02 PM
  poeticpiers
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Nightfall 08 for Bro John 
 
 
Nightfall 08
 
The evening sky in shades of grey.
 Light grey, dark, grey, all tinged with gold
Denotes the ending of the day.
I watch entranced as I behold
the darkness falling gradually.
The blue transmutes to indigo,
 the last remnants of day light flee.
Reluctantly but they must go.
The stars come slowly into view.
The constellations wheel and turn,
 forever old forever new
And catch your eye each in their turn.
If I but wait the moon will rise.
Each night provides some new surprise.
 
18-Jul-08
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New Post 7/19/2008 4:25 PM
  John
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Re: Nightfall 08 for Bro John 

I  like this, Ivor, especially,

"The constellations wheel and turn,

forever old forever new"

John

 
New Post 7/19/2008 5:08 PM
  Lena
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Re: Nightfall 08 for Bro John 
Modified By Lena  on 7/19/2008 6:11:26 PM)

Your Poem brings out the magical beauty of that moment, it also brings me back to some of my happiest moments in my life, it brings me into sweet memories with my lovely, but departed Nana…We spent many moments watching the days turn into evenings, and the evenings into nights under the starry skies, full of awe!  Every moment with my Nana was magical, Nana was so loving, and had one of the most beautiful smiles ever seen.  Thanks Poeticpiers -  Keep on writing, and I will keep on reading…I love your writing!

 

Blessings!


Sincerely, Lena M. Fuller
 
New Post 8/4/2008 11:53 AM
  Savior's_Breath
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Re: Nightfall 08 for Bro John 

This reminds me of something I wrote a lil' while ago... I like it a lot.  only difference w/ mine is that its dismal!  My writting is awful.

 
New Post 8/16/2008 3:30 AM
  poeticpiers
146 posts
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Re: Nightfall 08 for Bro John 

We are poor judges of our own writing my friend  We do our best and thats all anyone can do I have enjoyed someof your work

 
New Post 8/16/2008 5:42 AM
  SamiA
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Re: Nightfall 08 for Bro John 

I am amazed here. I love the verse "The constellations wheel and turn, forever old and forever new". Stunning write.   SamiA

 
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