all they do is yell at me
flip there hair and flirt with me
she's so hot she's so cute
she so smart she knows it all..."she's"
the way she dances the way she moves
ryan something i was 17..."I" (line makes no sense)
yelling and cring she wouldn't walk beside me..."crying"
sound so cold yes i know..."I"
she confesses her love from behind
who is she i do not know..."I"
baby she say's ooo i liked it i froze..."says" "I" "I"
she said it's over it hadn't begone..."begun"
every ending is a begining they say
yelling and sreaming john thats my name..."John" "that's"
i'm a retarted as@ HOLE all the same..."I'm" "retarded"
i like them tall they fit better small..."I"
just one i want yes thats all..."I" "that's"
just one to call mine o so hard to find..."oh"
with these teeth i couldn't kiss..."I"
those soft lips i'm getting them fixxed..."I'm" "fixed"
in these walls i'll keep on looking..."I'll"
come back when i 23 till then..."I'm"
just call me baby
"when reading say it like"
If you want people to read your work in a certain way try punctuating it, that's what punctuation is for. Use a spell check and try capitalizing proper nouns. Most readers won't take you seriously as a writer until you start taking yourself seriously. You can't say enough for proofreading. It is most helpful as is a careful edit of your work. This is a public forum ...put your best foot forward. And by all means see a dentist.
Please accept these words in the spirit with which they are intended...to help you improve.
John