Is That You

You are in the shadows,

I hear your faint cries,

I feel the chill

As you rush by.

When did you die?

This manifestation you gave,

Informs me,

That you came from your grave.

 This mourns me.

Is that you?

Where will you go too,

What will you do?

A ghost,

Or merely a hoax?

Mystifying.

poeticpiers wrote I thnink perhaps this grieves me would fit better than this mourns me. Just a suggestion to heed or ignore  ivor

Hi Ivor....Sorry that it took so long to get back with you...thank you for your comment.  I will take your suggestion into consideration.  I feel like " this grieves me" might throw it off a bit sound wise....as far as the flow of the poem.  But, I will go back and reevaluate it, until I am satified with it one way or the other.  Thank you again, I appreciate your time, and opinion.