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New Post 5/10/2008 6:52 AM
  poeticpiers
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Homing Instinct 
Homing instinct
 
Love that you freely give away.
Somehow always returns to you,
it is debt that most repay.
Love that you freely give away
 and yet it still contrives to stay
exactly where you meant it to.
Love that you freely give away
 somehow always returns to you.
 
4-May-08
 
Triolet. 
 A French octave poem
 turning on only two rhymes
 and including two refrains
Every line is the same metrical length
Rhyme Pattern ABaAabAB
 
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New Post 5/16/2008 8:34 AM
  isis277
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Re: Homing Instinct 

I never heard of ths form before, but  am not very familiar with alot of structures...i liked this alot...love rhyme anyway and this form seems one i might try myself...your choice of refrain was pretty good too...

Isis277

 

 
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