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New Post 6/2/2008 5:10 PM
  isis277
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The Bottom Line 
The Bottom Line

 

Remaining the ocean,
salt weed and waves;
treacherous emotion
designed to enslave
dogged devotion
til' reaching the grave,
this eternal demotion
from love to depraved
shell of erosion,
its heart was too brave
and even death's potion
won’t soothe or save.

 

 
New Post 6/2/2008 5:38 PM
  Lena
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Re: The Bottom Line 

Very nice Rhyme Isis…I havent written a Rhyme yet, but I love to read them, and this is very nice.

Thank you!


Sincerely, Lena M. Fuller
 
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