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New Post 5/16/2008 7:06 AM
  isis277
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The Craft 

The Craft

 

You seduce with jewelry;

I do it writing poetry.

 

Mindless of art and detail,

both truly in the end

hold different and yet vital

subterfuged flaws

numb behind masks

of hypnotic beauty;

wrought by a setting

you bathed in glitter

 

or words so defined

by my inspired pen.

 

Hidden;

they seek only to last

no short of forever.

 

Yours will by sheer fact,

mine by luck’s wrath.

 
New Post 6/22/2008 4:37 PM
  Mac
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Re: The Craft 

    One can never really  know where the beauty of  poetry or jewels may wander to, I consider myself "gifted" to be able to gaze on such treasures and be awed, though I profess that shall never truely own either. A well-done poetic achievement, isis277. I love the way that you have blended the comparison of two different entities of seduction, and then lock it down with that well-rounded couplet at the end. Kudos!!! 

Mac

 
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